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SweetStarz
08.05.2007, 17:22
hey guys :)
so morgen steht ne englisch arbeit an und wir müssen einen Text über animaltesting schreiben mit unserer Meinung. Also hier mal ein Versuch von
mir, bitte korrigiert mich bei Fehlern :p

Ps: Kritisiert mich ruhig, vorschläge wären gut :o

What do you think about animal testing?

I am of the opinion that animal testing is not good, because they catch them and imprison
the animals. They also can't move around, because they're held in cages. Iam certain that
we can help those animals. You can join for example the animal aid, or you can tell rich ladies
that they shouldn't buy or wear fur. But you must consider that they require animal testing for
good purposes. With the testing they can develop new medicines. Or it's important too, because
you have to fight against dangerous illnesses such as the HIV-Virus. I have to come to the
conclusion, that it's difficult to say that animal testing is a good or bad thing.